Essay Draft 3

Social media has become increasingly important to Japanese teenagers. Popular social media in Japan such as Twitter, mixi, and GRee become major platforms for these teenagers to actively engage in. A white paper published by Ministry of Home Affairs & Communications in 2011 discovered that 71.2 percent of teenagers in Japan use one or more social media platforms. In the same white paper, it shows that 73.7% of social media users use social media for the purpose of searching and communicating with strangers with similar interests. This white paper shows that there is a high proportion of teenage social media users are susceptible to risks of falling into traps set by strangers. Other than communicating with people with similar interests, teenagers also tend to use social media to engage in deeper level communications with acquaintances. As a result of such a high dependency on social networks for communication, Japanese teenagers became more prone to the dangers brought by online predators. The susceptibility of Japanese teenagers against dangers of social media lies in loose regulation of the Internet environment. In addition, further education and warning should be implemented to raise the level of alertness of teenagers.

Teenagers use social media to communicate. Due to the availability of free chat functions on these platforms, the media became sexually tainted. As a result, sex crimes such as compensation dating and rapes arise from over-dependency on social media for communication. In addition to social media, Deai-kei site, or dating web services in English, have not been regulated so as to protect teenage users. Within the process of chatting with strangers online, some teenagers are convinced to reveal their personal information and to meet these strangers. According to Inoue (2010), there are more than 1000 teenage victims each year in Japan that government regulations have to be implemented to reduce this tragic number. There have been strict institutional enforcement of usage and social media users monitoring. The root of the problem lies in the insufficiency of education on risks of social media as well as floppy attitude towards underage sex.

Law and regulation enforcement against social media usage should be implemented especially for teenagers. One way to do so is to implement registration by real names and particulars in social media sites where free-chat functions are allowed. If users register themselves with real particulars, law enforcement bodies such as police and the Ministry of Home Affairs & Communication can track down any inappropriate conversations in preventing criminal activities against teenagers. In addition, users with particulars registered will allow monitoring bodies to ensure that the internet environment is safe for teenagers. Social media sites are being used for dating purposes in many cases, and victims usually are unaware of the risks they might face. Implementing such regulations can at least bring any offenders to justice and can at least rescue the victim before anything worse could happen. However, the setback of this system is that individuals can use fake particulars to register online for SNS services. Tracking might also be difficult when users register with fake addresses or other people’s addresses. A higher level of security can also be suggested by requiring parents’ or guardians’ information such as their driver’s license numbers or credit card numbers. There will always be loopholes in monitoring online activities, and there will be criticisms on privacy intrusions. For a safer internet environment for teenagers, such measures are necessary to a large extent. 

The Chinese government monitors its internet contents extensively in fear of political unrest, and Japan could use the same method in warning teenage users against potential dangers. In China, websites, instant messaging services such as QQ and WeChat, and online forums have been closely monitored by the government. When there are sensitive keywords such as money, remittance, or political words appearing in the content, the system automatically detects the keyword and warn users against potential threats. If this system is being introduced in Japan across all social media and phone applications, teenagers could be warned against potential sex crimes. Inoue(2010) pointed out that there was a case of a victim aged 16 years old being asked to send nude photos of herself to a stranger in exchange for in-game coins for popular application GRee in Okayama Prefecture, violating the law of child pornography prohibition. Such conversation exchange should have been brought down before the dignity of the girl was ruined by such a pervert. Although the West will heavily criticize that such strict control of the internet is violating the spirit of freedom, the act of exploitation of freedom by suspicious ones must be curbed. 

Even though hard measures are being implemented, the root of the social media susceptibility occur in teenagers lies in education. School and parental education on Japanese teenagers can focus on risks of using social media sites, with emphasis on how to identify hints or invitations to these activities. There is a need to alert teenage users that social media sites contain more risks behind communicating only, and education on prevention of leakage of personal information is necessary as well. Information-technology and Promotion Agency in Japan has warned teenage users on how to prevent risks, such as not revealing personal information and set higher security level. The agencies also provide support in case of tragedy happens. Although there are education on the national level, but parental and school levels are insufficient. In Japan, third-party organizations which promote SNS safety are active outside campus, but the penetration rate amongst students may be a big question mark.

Furthermore, there is insufficient education on correct attitudes towards sex. Many Japanese teenagers consider that it is normal and acceptable to be engaged in sexual activities at their age. Suzui et al. (2006) found that 77.2% of high school girls view sexual activities being acceptable. If teenagers do not treasure their bodies and safety, sex seekers will have a greater chance in preying upon them. Teenagers need to know that the casualness of sex will lead to greater problems such as law breaking, sexually transmitted diseases, and pregnancies. All in all, there should be a greater level of education at a closer life proximity with teenagers.

In conclusion, regulations and educations should work together in order to compensate the shortcoming of each other with regard to reducing the danger of social media usage by teenagers. While government regulation and monitoring can reduce new cases of teenage sex crimes, education from young can instill a sense or alertness at a massive scale that future or existing social media users will know how to protect themselves against the dangers presented by sex predators.

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References

Inoue, O. (2010, December 8). SNS wo nayamasu Deai kei mondai no Shinen, Hi-deaikei no higai jidosu wa saiaku suijun he [Abyss of troubles from SNS dating services, child victims numbers from non-dating websites increased to worst levels]. Nikkei Keizai News. Retrieved from http://www.nikkei.com/article/DGXZZO19323130T01C10A2000000/

Ministry of Home Affairs & Communications. (2011). Sosyaru media no riyoujyouhou: Heisei 23 nen ban, jyouhou tsushinhakusho [Usage on social media, white paper 2011 version] Ministry of Home Affairs & Communications Japan. Retrieved from http://www.soumu.go.jp/johotsusintokei/whitepaper/ja/h23/html/nc232310.html

Information-technology and Promotion Agency. (2014). Higai ni attara [In case there is a crime] (2014), Information-technology and Promotion Agency Japan. Retrieved from http://www.ipa.go.jp/security/kokokara/accident/

Suzui, E., & Hiraoka, A. (2006). Attitudes towards Sexuality among High School Students in Japan. 12(2007 89-96), 1-1. Retrieved from http://www.kawasaki-m.ac.jp/soc/mw/journal/en/2007-e12-2/05_suzui.pdf

Problem-Solution Essay Draft 2

Sex crime such as compensation dating, pornography and rapes, these are the most disturbing tragedies that every parent in Japan wish to prevent on their children. 71.2 percent of teenagers (Ministry of Internal Affairs & Communication, 2011) at their tens actively engage in activities on social media platforms. Prominent social media in Japan such as GRee, mixi, Mobage and DeNA, become major platforms for these teenagers to be actively engaged in, as such the risks of crime as result of high degree of usage have come into the spotlight for social concern. In addition to social media, Deai-kei site, or dating web services in English, have not been regulated against teenage users. At the process of chatting with online strangers, teenagers are convinced to meet strangers and thus making them susceptible to threats. There are more than 1000 teenage victims each year in Japan (Nikkei, 2010), which government regulations have to come into effect to reduce this tragic number. However, even though strict institutional enforcement on usage and SNS users monitoring, the root of problems lie at the insufficiency of education on risks of social media as well as attitude towards sex.

Law and regulation enforcement against social media usage should be implemented especially against teenagers. To do so, one way is to implement registration by real-names and particulars in social media sites where they free-chat functions are allowed. For users to be registered with real particulars, law enforcement bodies such as police and Ministry of Home Affairs & Communication can track down any inappropriate conversations involving teenagers and potential sexual activities seekers. In addition it can ensure that an internet environment has been monitored in protecting against teenagers. Social media sites are being used for dating purposes in many cases, and victims usually are unaware of the risks they might face. By implementing such a hard measure can at least bring any offenders into justice, and can at least rescue the victim before anything worse could happen. However, the setback of this system is that individuals can use fake particulars to register online SNS services, particularly in Japan where there isn’t a system of national identity registration. Tracking might also be difficult when users register with fake addresses or other people’s addresses. It might seem impossible to urge Japan to introduce a nationals identity registration system like other countries such as Korea, China and Singapore, yet a higher level of security can be done by requiring information such as driver’s license number or credit card numbers. There will always be loopholes in monitoring online activities, and there will be criticisms on privacy intrusions. Yet for a safer internet environment for teenagers, such measures are necessary to a large extent. 

The Chinese government monitored its internet contents extensively at each words in fear of political unrest, and Japan could use the same method in warning teenage users against potential dangers. In China, websites, instant-messaging services such as QQ and WeChat, and online forums have been closely monitored by the government. When there are sensitive keywords such as money, remittance, political words appear in the content, the system automatically detects the keyword and warn users against potential threats. If social networks could introduce this system in Japan, teenagers could be warned against potential sex crimes. There was a case of a victim aged 16 years old, being asked to send nude photos of herself to a stranger in exchange of in-game coins for popular application GRee, in Okayama Prefecture (Nikkei, 2010), violating the law of child pornography prohibition. Such conversation exchange should have been brought down, before the dignity of the girl being ruined by such pervert. Therefore, although it will be heavily criticized by the west that such strict control on internet is violating the spirit of freedom, yet the act of exploitation of freedom by suspicious ones must be curbed. 

Even though hard measures could have been implemented, the root of SNS susceptibility of teenagers lies in education. School and parental education can focus on risks of using social media sites, with emphasis on how to identify hints or invitations on these activities. There is a need to alert teenage users that social media sites contain more risks behind communicating only, and education on prevention on leakage of personal information is needed as well. Information-technology and Promotion Agency (IPA) has warned teenage users on how to prevent risks, such as not revealing personal information and set higher security level. The agencies also provided support in case of tragedy happens. Yet, there might have been education on the national level, but parental and school level is insufficient. In Japan, third-party organizations which promote SNS safety are active outside campus, but the penetration rate in students may be a big question mark. Furthermore, there is insufficient education on correct attitude towards sex. Many teenagers consider that it is normal and acceptable in engaged in sexual activities at their age, with persons they know or do not know. If teenagers do not treasure their bodies and safety, sex seekers will have greater chance in preying them. Teenagers need to know casualness of sex will lead to greater problems such as law breaking, sexually transmitted diseases and pregnancies. All in all, there should be a greater level on education at a closer life proximity with teenagers. 

In conclusion, hard and soft measures should work together in order to compensate the shortcoming of each other. While hard measures such as government regulation and monitoring can reduce new cases of teenage sex crimes, education from young can instill a sense or alertness at a massive scale that future or existing SNS users will know how to protect themselves against dangers. 

947 words

Reference

Inoue, O. (2010, December 8). ＳＮＳを悩ます「出会い系」問題の深淵　非出会い系の被害児童数は最悪水準へ. Retrieved from http://www.nikkei.com/article/DGXZZO19323130T01C10A2000000/

ソーシャルメディアの利用状況 ： 平成23年版 情報通信白書 [Usage on social media, white paper 2013 version] (2011), Ministry of Home Affairs & Communications (Japan)

被害に遭ったら [In case there is a crime] (2014), Information-technology and Promotion Agency (IPA) (Japan)

The Essay

Compensation dating, child pornography, sexual assaults and monetary frauds, these are the most disturbing tragedies that every parent in Japan wish to prevent on their children. 71.2 percent of teenagers at their tens actively engage in activities on social media platforms. Prominent social media in Japan such as GRee, mixi, Mobage and DeNA, become major platforms for these teenagers to be actively engaged in, as such the risks of crime as result of high degree of usage have come into the spotlight for social concern. Deai-kei site, or dating web services in English, have not been regulated against teenage users. At the process of chatting with online strangers, teenagers are deceived to meet strangers and thus making them susceptible to threats. There are more than 1000 teenage victims each year in Japan, which government regulations have to come into effect to reduce this tragic number. However, even though strict institutional enforcement on usage and SNS users monitoring, the root of problems lie at the insufficiency of education on teenagers on risks of social media, and heavy reliance on social media sites.

Law and regulation enforcement against social media usage should be implemented especially against teenagers. To do so, one way is to implement registration by real-names and particulars in social media sites where they free-chat functions are allowed. For users to be registered with real particulars, law enforcement bodies such as police and Ministry of Home Affairs & Communication can track down any inappropriate conversations involving teenagers and potential sexual activities seekers. In addition it can ensure that an internet environment has been monitored in protecting against teenagers. Social media sites are being used for dating purposes in many cases, and victims usually are unaware of the risks they might face. By implementing such a hard measure can at least bring any offenders into justice, and can at least rescue the victim before anything worse could happen. However, the setback of this system is that individuals can use fake particulars to register online SNS services, particularly in Japan where there isn’t a system of national identity registration. Tracking might also be difficult when users register with fake addresses or other people’s addresses. It might seem impossible to urge Japan to introduce a nationals identity registration system like other countries such as Korea, China and Singapore, yet a higher level of security can be done by requiring information such as driver’s license number or credit card numbers. There will always be loopholes in monitoring online activities, and there will be criticisms on privacy intrusions. Yet for a safer internet environment for teenagers, such measures are necessary to a large extent. 

The Chinese government monitored its internet contents extensively at each words in fear of political unrest, and Japan could use the same method in warning teenage users against potential dangers. In China, websites, instant-messaging services such as QQ and WeChat, and online forums have been closely monitored by the government. When there are sensitive keywords such as money, remittance, political words appear in the content, the system automatically detects the keyword and warn users against potential threats. If social networks could introduce this system in Japan, teenagers could be warned against potential sex crimes and monetary frauds. In-game purchases in popular application GRee have been the most popular target of monetary fraud in teenagers, according to Metropolitan Police Department in 2012. There was a case of a victim aged 16 years old, being asked to send nude photos of herself to a stranger in exchange of in-game coins in Okayama Prefecture (Nikkei, 2010), violating the law of child pornography prohibition. Such conversation exchange should have been brought down, before the dignity of the girl being ruined by such pervert. Therefore, although it will be heavily criticized by the west that such strict control on internet is violating the spirit of freedom, yet the act of exploitation of freedom by suspicious ones must be curbed. 

Even though hard measures could have been implemented, the root of SNS susceptibility of teenagers lies in education. School and parental education can focus on risks of using social media sites, with emphasis on how to identify hints or invitations on these activities. There is a need to alert on teenage users that social media sites contain more risks behind communicating only, and education on prevention on personal information is needed as well. Information-technology and Promotion Agency (IPA) has warned teenage users on how to prevent risks, such as not revealing personal information and set higher security level. The agencies also provided support in case of tragedy happens. Yet, there might have been education on the national level, but parental and school level is insufficient. In Japan, third-party organizations which promote SNS safety are active outside campus, but the penetration rate in students may be a big question mark. Therefore, there should be a greater level on education at a closer life proximity with teenagers. 

In conclusion, hard and soft measures should work together in order to compensate the shortcoming of each other. While hard measures such as government regulation and monitoring can reduce new cases of teenage sex crimes, education from young can instill a sense or alertness at a massive scale that future or existing SNS users will know how to protect themselves against dangers. 


917 words

Reference

ソーシャルメディアの利用状況 ： 平成23年版 情報通信白書 [Usage on social media, white paper 2013 version] (2011), Ministry of Home Affairs & Communications (Japan)

Inoue, O. (2010, December 8). ＳＮＳを悩ます「出会い系」問題の深淵　非出会い系の被害児童数は最悪水準へ. [The deep-rooted problem of Deai-kei that making SNS a mess, Worse level of child victims in non-deai-kei websites] Retrieved from http://www.nikkei.com/article/DGXZZO19323130T01C10A2000000/

被害に遭ったら [In case there is a crime] (2014), Information-technology and Promotion Agency (IPA) (Japan)

Essay Outline

Main problem:  Many Japanese social media sites such as 2-channel, mixi and LINE, colloquially known as deai-kei sites, have been manipulated for dating with compensation, sexual crimes such as child pornography and rape, especially against junior and senior high school girls.

Affected target group/stakeholder: Teenage girls, their safety, guardians, community.

Agent of change/stakeholder: Ministry of Technology, social media corporations, guardians

Solution 1: Enforcements of registration by real-names and particulars in media sites where they free-chat functions.

Evaluation 1: For users to be registered with real names and particulars, law enforcement bodies such as police and ministry of technology can faster track down on people who committed crime, and also to ensure an internet environment has been monitored for safety purposes. Social media sites are being used for dating purposes in many cases, and victims usually are unaware of the risks they might face. Individuals can therefore use fake particulars especially in Japan where there isn’t a system of identity registration of its nationals, even though adults can use driver’s license numbers and credit card information. Tracking might also be difficult when users register with fake addresses or other people’s addresses.

Solution 2: School and parental education on risks of using social media sites, with emphasis on how to identify hints or invitations on these activities. Social media sites contain more risks behind communicating only, and education on prevention on personal information is needed as well.

Implication/Conclusion: Teenagers might be reluctant to comply with since social media sites have become their main tool of communication and many made them their only window to see outside world.

Thesis: Even though strict institutional enforcement on usage and SNS users monitoring, the root of problems lie at the insufficiency of education on teenagers on risks of social media, and heavy reliance on social media sites.